Learner response

 WWW:

Audio editing 

Post production effects

Camera work/ good use of potrait framing

Good concept

Good nights time shooting

On screen text/ effects

EBI: 

Return to reaction at the end 

More shots, locations and faster editing

Too short


Student comments: 


Good concept but needs to be longer and editing more engaging


For my second concept ill make sure to utilise the schools studio spaces and use engaging editing et cetera and use a very original and captivating idea of my planned interview.

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